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2202.10289

The Mathematics of Evolution: The Price Equation, Natural Selection, and Environmental Change

Tom LaGatta

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Strong Field
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Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM

Audit review

The candidate solution proves the same Price Representation Theorem as the paper: it defines wNS(i, d\tilde{i}) = W(\tilde{i})\,\delta_i(d\tilde{i}) and wEC(\tilde{i}, di') = w_{\tilde{i}}(di')/W(\tilde{i}), shows w = wEC \circ wNS, and establishes equality of selective terms and environmental terms via the tilted expectation Ẽ[\cdot] = E[U\,\cdot]. These steps correspond exactly to equations (4.1)–(4.4) and their proof in Theorem 4.4 of the paper, including the use of the intermediate measure \tilde{\mu} = W\mu and the identity Ẽ[\cdot] = E[U\cdot] . The candidate’s handling of the W=0 set and light integrability remarks are consistent with the paper’s setup (finite-variance process) and standard measure-theoretic conventions.

Referee report (LaTeX)

\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions

\textbf{Journal Tier:} strong field

\textbf{Justification:}

The candidate reproduces the paper’s theorem and proof with fidelity. The factorization w = wEC ∘ wNS, equality of selective terms, and environmental tilting argument are all correct. Minor clarifications on null sets (W=0), explicit population-size positivity for defining U, and integrability scope would improve accessibility without altering substance.