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2205.14982

Dynamical Model of Mild Atherosclerosis: Applied Mathematical Aspects

Debasmita Mukherjee, Sishu Shankar Muni, Hammed Olawale Fatoyinbo

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The paper’s Theorem 2 claims that the reduced two-dimensional system (5)–(6) is locally asymptotically stable at the nonzero equilibrium E2 provided two inequalities hold (its items 1 and 2). From the paper, the reduced model is obtained via QSSA with Ls = d m / ((f+m)(1+e M)), leading to (5)–(6) and the Jacobian J2 in (12), with Theorem 2 stated explicitly on pp. 12–13 . At E2, the equilibrium identity a/(1+σ) g(L2) = ε + c, with g(L) = L/(1+L) and L2 = d m2/((f+m2)(1+e M2)), implies ε + c = a d m2/((1+σ)D) where D := (f+m2)(1+e M2) + d m2. The paper’s inequality (i) is algebraically equal to a d m2/((1+σ)D) + J11 < ε + c, where J11 > 0 at E2, hence (i) is impossible to satisfy at any nonzero equilibrium (contradiction). Its inequality (ii) is equivalent to J21 > 0, which, using c = b d M2/D at E2, reduces to D > f(1+e M2), automatically true for m2 > 0. Therefore Theorem 2’s sufficient conditions are vacuous: (i) cannot hold and (ii) is automatically true, so the theorem’s implication is incorrect. In contrast, the model’s solution derives the correct Jacobian at E2 from (5)–(6) and applies the 2×2 Routh–Hurwitz criteria (trace < 0, det > 0), giving necessary and sufficient stability conditions; it also proposes a corrected sufficient pair that exactly matches those criteria. This aligns with the standard Lyapunov indirect method and matrix theory. Key paper elements cited: the reduced system (5)–(6) and QSSA formula, the Jacobian (12), and Theorem 2 statement .

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\textbf{Recommendation:} major revisions

\textbf{Journal Tier:} specialist/solid

\textbf{Justification:}

The modeling framework and reduction are reasonable and the numerical exploration is extensive. However, the central analytic stability result for the reduced ODE system (Theorem 2) is flawed: one inequality contradicts the equilibrium identity and the other is automatically true at nonzero equilibria, rendering the theorem vacuous. This must be corrected to ensure the analytic claims match the linearization and standard Routh–Hurwitz criteria. Given the scope of the paper, this constitutes a significant but fixable issue.