2212.08498
Evaluating vaccine allocation strategies using simulation-assisted causal modelling
Armin Kekić, Jonas Dehning, Luigi Gresele, Julius von Kügelgen, Viola Priesemann, Bernhard Schölkopf
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- Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM
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The paper derives the target function s(π̃) for expected severe cases by (i) writing the intervention as MD E[S | do(T1,T2,T3 ∼ P̃(·|A))], (ii) expanding via law of total probability over A, T, W, and vaccination times, (iii) using the deterministic relationships V,W as functions of (t,t1,t2,t3), and (iv) substituting the severity-mechanism factorization Pπ̃(S=1|V,A,T,W)=f0(T) g(V,A) hV(W) f1_π̃(A,T) to obtain the four-range triple-sum in Eq. (5). The supplementary derivation shows the CI steps and the deterministic elimination V,W → ranges in Eqs. (57)–(60). The candidate solution makes the same conditioning/partition argument, explicitly enumerates the ranges for (t1,t2,t3), factors out f0(t) and f1_π̃(a,t), and recovers exactly the same triple-sum expression. Assumptions match those in the paper, including the independence of f1_π̃(A,T) from V and W via the infection-dynamics correction (Eqs. (19)–(20)). Hence both are correct and follow substantially the same proof path. See the paper’s Eq. (5) in Section 4.1 and the detailed derivation in Supplement B (Eqs. (57)–(60) and the factorization (2), (19)–(20)) .
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\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions \textbf{Journal Tier:} strong field \textbf{Justification:} The derivation of the target function is correct, transparent, and adequately justified by the causal graph and the severity-mechanism factorization. The supplementary material supplies a complete, reproducible chain of equalities from the interventional expectation to the final summation. Minor editorial clarifications would make the derivation more accessible to readers less familiar with stochastic interventions and deterministic nodes, but these do not affect validity.