2402.08700
Optimal control of collective electrotaxis in epithelial monolayers
Simon F. Martina-Perez, Isaac B. Breinyn, Daniel J. Cohen, Ruth E. Baker
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- math.DS
- Journal tier
- Strong Field
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- Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM
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Audit review
The paper sets up and solves optimal-control surrogates for “constant velocity” (minimizing ∫ v̇² with a terminal velocity constraint, and then a windowed constant-velocity objective), deriving adjoint conditions and computing controls numerically. It reports that achieving an (approximately) constant velocity requires an unrealistically large initial electric field that then “rapidly decays,” and with amplitude bounds the terminal error improves as the bound grows. Those claims are well documented in their Sections 3.6–3.7 and figures (e.g., the statement about a very large initial field and a near-constant effective signal seff, and the smax study) . However, the paper does not present a simple analytical characterization of the exact-control problem “v(t)≡v⋆ on [0,T],” even though its state equations are linear (Eq. (8) with zero initial conditions, Eq. (9)) . The candidate solution gives that analytic necessity: v̇=0 forces seff≡(γ/α)v⋆ and, with the model’s İ=(s−I)/τa and ṡeff=(s−seff−I)/τe, one must have s(t)=seff+I(t)= (γ/α)v⋆(1+t/τa), i.e., a linearly increasing control; also, exact constancy on an interval containing t=0 is impossible without impulses. This derivation is correct for the paper’s linear dynamics and clarifies feasibility under amplitude bounds. In contrast, the paper’s narrative line that a very large initial field then “rapidly decays” to maintain a constant seff is not consistent with the linear state equations if v is exactly constant; exact constancy requires ṡ=seff/τa>0 thereafter. The paper’s numerical results address different costed objectives (budgeted or bounded control, terminal constraints, windowed constancy) and so do not contradict the candidate’s exact-control necessity; they are simply a different problem. Net: the model’s exact-control analysis is correct and fills a gap; the paper’s treatment is insightful but incomplete on this specific analytic point.
Referee report (LaTeX)
\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions \textbf{Journal Tier:} strong field \textbf{Justification:} The paper is well executed and insightful in its optimal-control and calibration components. For the specific constant-velocity question under the stated linear dynamics, a brief analytic derivation of the necessary control (and the impossibility of immediate constancy without impulses) would remove ambiguity and strengthen the exposition, aligning the narrative with the model’s linear structure.