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2507.12915

Detecting the most probable transition phenomenon of a nutrient–phytoplankton–zooplankton system

Hui Wang, Ying Wang, Xi Chen

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Sep 28, 2025, 12:56 AM

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The paper defines the Onsager–Machlup (OM) functional with V=(σσ^T)^{-1}, b_i(ω)=\tilde b_i(ω)−(1/2)∑_{l,j}(V^{-1})_{lj}Γ^i_{lj}, and includes div b and the −R/6 curvature term; for σ=diag(εx,εy,εz) it computes Γ^1_{11}=−1/x, Γ^2_{22}=−1/y, Γ^3_{33}=−1/z, R=0, the modified drift b=(f+ε^2x/2, g+ε^2y/2, h+ε^2z/2), and div b=f_x+g_y+h_z−f/x−g/y−h/z, yielding the explicit Lagrangian and the Euler–Lagrange system (3.3) for the six-dimensional first-order form in (x,y,z,u,v,w) with u=ẋ, v=ẏ, w=ż. These match the candidate’s derivation step-for-step, including the cancellations and the final ODEs; see the paper’s definitions and computations of the OM functional, modified drift, divergence, R=0, and the displayed ODEs (3.3) . The probabilistic conclusion that minimizing S(ω) maximizes the leading-order tube probability is also stated in the paper . The model additionally notes the natural transversality condition at the terminal set Γ (not spelled out in the paper), but this is a standard consequence of free-endpoint variational problems and does not create a discrepancy with the paper’s results.

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\textbf{Recommendation:} minor revisions

\textbf{Journal Tier:} specialist/solid

\textbf{Justification:}

The manuscript correctly develops the Onsager–Machlup formalism for a diagonally multiplicative NPZ system and derives the associated Euler–Lagrange equations, then uses a neural shooting method to compute most probable transition paths. The core calculations (connection, modified drift, divergence, curvature) are accurate and the final ODE system matches the OM variational principle. Minor revisions would improve rigor and readability: explicitly state the function space and domain restrictions (positivity), present the natural transversality condition for terminal-set constraints, and tidy up notational consistency for metric indices. These are presentational, not substantive, issues.